Is the song suppose to have that transistion at 0:15???
- Try to make the keycam have one transition. You can use more keys, but try to make it flow like it should have been a drone or something else. Not a sudden move of direction as it`s shown at 0:26.
- Try to not make slowmo on the editing program by slowing a full speed footage. It will make it laggy. Instead you can film it twice. One with full speed and one with the ingame slowmo. Example on 0:33.
- Same as what I mentioned at first. No sudden movement on the keycams. At 0:36 it starts from a stop to a moving camera. You can either start the key before just so it can move during the whole footage. Plus it`s a plus if you can manage to have to rider on screen during the whole scene
- Some of the editing seemed to untidy. Like it was just put there at times.
- Work on making the transistions to go more with the music you`re using.
- Vary on your FOV next time
Keep up the work