- You still have to vary on the FOV. They seem a little high at times. Would suggest going down to the 20s at times.
- The beat at 0:11 would suit better if it started with riding since you already did build it up on the intro of the song
- Keycams could also be more varied. Can do them vertical, not only horisontal. Can also make them more slow at times.
- This is only my opinion, but slowmo on the chrorus would fit a little better
- Transitions between each scene looks a bit better if they`re changed on the beat. Also much easier to get right when working on it
They`re getting better and I like that you take the guidelines I did last time. Hopefully you continue on working on it. Another thing which can help you a lot is to watch good moto/skiing/Snowboard etc videos and study how they do it and get some inspiration and motivation on the next projects