My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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hildy21
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My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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My first sim edit, i know the quality is gross and i'm still learning, but feedback would be great :)

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Davinho222
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Re: My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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Go to the google searchbar...type in OCam..download the program, thank me later..
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Re: My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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Or just buy fraps, worth it imo. Anyway, start using keycams and then I can give you proper advice
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Re: My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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Or do that. Ocam is free tho... either way you will get rid of that fraps on top of your videos
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Re: My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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- Work a little bit more with the cameras. Part at 0:46, you stop moving the camera and then move it a little bit where you could instead have it flow throughout the scene. :)
- The scene at 0:49 goes from stop - move - stop. Make it move throughout the scene again and cut of the part where it is still.
- To make it more realistic. Do not let the rider drive through the camera at 1:21.
- Vary with the keycams. They seem to be only following the rider from the sides at most part. You can do them in and Y-axis too instead of just x-axis :mrgreen:
- Cut of the part where the rider is in distance or not in the picture. You kind of end up just waiting in the end.
- IMO the real speed to slow-mo didn`t really fit the music, they kind of seemed randomly put at times.
- Try to make less keys when doing keycams, it get messy by having a lot of them in one scene.


Keep it up :)
hildy21
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Re: My first sim edit, tell me what you think

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02RR02 wrote:- Work a little bit more with the cameras. Part at 0:46, you stop moving the camera and then move it a little bit where you could instead have it flow throughout the scene. :)
- The scene at 0:49 goes from stop - move - stop. Make it move throughout the scene again and cut of the part where it is still.
- To make it more realistic. Do not let the rider drive through the camera at 1:21.
- Vary with the keycams. They seem to be only following the rider from the sides at most part. You can do them in and Y-axis too instead of just x-axis :mrgreen:
- Cut of the part where the rider is in distance or not in the picture. You kind of end up just waiting in the end.
- IMO the real speed to slow-mo didn`t really fit the music, they kind of seemed randomly put at times.
- Try to make less keys when doing keycams, it get messy by having a lot of them in one scene.


Keep it up :)
Thanks heaps for the advice man, ill try fix it up for a cleaner edit next time.
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