Joben's Training Facility (Would like Feedback)

[Joben727]

Hey everyone, so I've been out of MXs for quite some time now, i've started playing again this month and decided to give Track Editing a go!
So yeah this is my first track, be-ware of beginners mistakes.

Would like to know if anyone has feedback, tips, links to different things?
Thanks very much and hope some of you enjoy the track, I do!









DOWNLOAD:http://www.sendspace.com/file/kqyyw1

[Joben727]

A lap around JTF.


I forgot to name the track Jobens training facility so it will come up 'Jobens Off Camber training'.

[Frachi412]

To be fair I've only put about 15-20 laps in on your track. But my quick overview is that it's pretty good for a first attempt.

Pros:
1.Track has a weird but nice flow.
2.The braking bumps make sense and work well with the flow.
3.Few weird little fun sections.

Cons:
1.Track map stands out too much. (Maybe make it a little more transparent)
2.Needs a little more berms and ruts.
3.A tiny bit more traction. (That's just my person preference though.)

[Joben727]

To be fair I've only put about 15-20 laps in on your track. But my quick overview is that it's pretty good for a first attempt.

Pros:
1.Track has a weird but nice flow.
2.The braking bumps make sense and work well with the flow.
3.Few weird little fun sections.

Cons:
1.Track map stands out too much. (Maybe make it a little more transparent)
2.Needs a little more berms and ruts.
3.A tiny bit more traction. (That's just my person preference though.)

Brilliant thanks for the feedback!
Yeah im struggling a little with making good corners, I really wanted to make some nice ruts but do not have a clue how people make them great on the GP tracks.
Haha, I got a bit carried away with the bomb hole!

Thanks man!

[Frachi412]

To be fair I've only put about 15-20 laps in on your track. But my quick overview is that it's pretty good for a first attempt.

Pros:
1.Track has a weird but nice flow.
2.The braking bumps make sense and work well with the flow.
3.Few weird little fun sections.

Cons:
1.Track map stands out too much. (Maybe make it a little more transparent)
2.Needs a little more berms and ruts.
3.A tiny bit more traction. (That's just my person preference though.)

Brilliant thanks for the feedback!
Yeah im struggling a little with making good corners, I really wanted to make some nice ruts but do not have a clue how people make them great on the GP tracks.
Haha, I got a bit carried away with the bomb hole!

Thanks man!

Ya dude you did well. I'm no track maker by any means but I think you have a good start here.