Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

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Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby FactoryBR21 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 1:48 am

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Sup guys here you go with my first track for MXSIMULATOR then try go easy on my ha ha , I would can't forget to say thanks for some guys
Wake , DDMX , Wilson , Showtime , DJ , Bas and JPRLisbon they helped me teaching , motivatin and testint my track. Thanks guys you rock
I hope you like this track , k i know the track isnot perfect but is pretty fun , enjoy
and i'm sure i'll still making more tracks cuz i love this game , i love this community.
Leave a descent comment about my track

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http://www.mediafire.com/file/nay5tzdzjbw/PineCreek.rar
Download Track for slow computers( Without shadows file)
http://www.mediafire.com/file/hm25xzktuwo/PineCreek.rar
Thanks guys , you're amazing like this community :wink:


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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby Mikey » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:13 am

Looks sick bruzzz D/L'ing now!
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby Pumaxcs » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:22 am

its about freaking time...

ill edit with a review

ok after awhile of thinking and getting some screens here it is

i agree with gordy i couldnt see some of the ruts or bumps in the track and that got a lil annoying not enough to make me not want to play it but its still a negative factor. i can tell some effort went into the objects and decals the layout was kinda fun besides all the jumps that were in a 90 degree turn (not that there a bad thing its different but i just dont like em...)

overall some minor things brought it down from a 5 so id say a 4.6
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby gordy » Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:30 am

an interesting first go at an mxs track.
first of all, i really think the track would have benefited from either more clearly highlighted ruts/jumps via decals, or with the repositioning of the light source to a lower spot to illuminate them better.
In its current state, i often felt like i was "flying blind" unable to clearly make out the rhythm section ahead of me.
the disp itself was fun and interesting, you made use of the large rolling whoops well, however, i feel that the track could have benefited from a few more complex rhythm sections. The corners were pretty straight forward and perhaps could have benefited from some variation in the camber.
the decals looked good for the most part, however, there was areas where the decals had a clear sharp edge where one ended and one begun, and that always wrecks the look of decals for me.
the excavator looked really cool, and i hope to see some similar models from you in the future
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby kwic73 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:05 am

wow that track looks sexy :wink:

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby Mittocs » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:13 am

I thought the track was fun but one major problem I have is that the jumps are to small for the track, its a fast track and im way over jumping every jump.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby ddmx » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:16 am

You gotta slow down mittocs, thats all. Br, this track is great, I really like it.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby FactoryBR21 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 3:17 am

I thought they were real and good size.... sorry if is it bad 2 you
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby MXF_ATOC-x111 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:00 am

I like this track FactoryBR21 great job, thx :D

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby stocksy129 » Tue Dec 09, 2008 9:55 am

i wish i could ride this track but because my pc is so shit i can't couldn't you have made it something other the a .saf so i could remove the objects so you could at least ride it ahaha. It looks so good

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby enzopersson » Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:39 am

it laggs a bit for me. And yeah it shouldent be safed so we could delite statues.

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby DJ99X » Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:44 am

There should be a PineCreek folder created somewhere. Just chuck a statues file from a blank track into that. It will be hard to see where the track goes though

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby enzopersson » Tue Dec 09, 2008 10:51 am

you mean blank not black? Well i got it to work, but not with the "Black track" I just turned down my graphics a bit. thanks enyways.

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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby frederick » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:43 pm

WOW this track is sick, i love the roughness of the track.
It feels like a GP track. Great work, i wanna see more rough/sand tracks from you!
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21

Postby Rallemx » Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:53 pm

Yeah its really rough but still smooth in some way..Really great track! :D
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