I would appriciate some feedback





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Credits:
Mecke96 - tileinfo (from Apex)
Checkerz - decals
Haggqvist - bales
Thanks!ROSE822 wrote:First beginner track i have seen ?!?!!? about time someone made one.
looks awesome bro
I don't know if checkerz made the decals or not, I saw them on Booneville '14 and asked Checkerz if I could use them and he said yes. I couldn't find any credits on the Booneville '14 topic so assumed checkerz made them. If ddmx made them, credit goes to him. I really want to give a proper credit list so good point is I was wrong.Pumaxcs wrote:I know checkerz well enough to know that crediting him with decals is going to be wrong. Not that it is that big of a deal but you may want to pay attention when it comes to that because some people really care about their credit. BTW, I'm thinking it was DDMX who actually made those?
I've actually made quite a few decals for my tracks as of late - but not these.Pumaxcs wrote:I by no means want you to think that was me telling you angrily to "get it together". I was more so making a laugh at the thought of checkerz making anything more than the terrain, because he doesn't.![]()
Regarding the size, I realized that pretty soon but didn't bother to change it, going to kick up the size for the next one. Yeah, it's too bumpy, but it was still pretty smooth so it was at least ridable :pPumaxcs wrote:I by no means want you to think that was me telling you angrily to "get it together". I was more so making a laugh at the thought of checkerz making anything more than the terrain, because he doesn't.![]()
This is a pretty good idea, I've had the idea to make stock-track-esque but have awful follow through these days. I think you used too small of a map and you are to close to the edges of the map and it just looks ugly. Also need to work on the track path, all the holes and bumps that are in the berms because you didn't smooth out the corner before hand or painted it weird can make the bike unsettled and isn't a good thing for a "begginer track". If you look up San Pasqual, Sonora, or Springburg by Voutare I think you can get a pretty good idea of what a simple, short, and fun track is at its best.
motoxjeff#7 wrote:JLV do you ever just sit back, and say " DAMN I made this game"? lol
Glad to hear! I'm thinking of making some more whenever I got some time :pKalleGarpedal347 wrote:i think its really good, first beginner track i´ve seen...
Prada wrote:I spent 5 minutes plunging my toilet today.
Phathry25 wrote:Don't try to apply logic to anything MiNi says.
I think he meant for download, not one of the stock tracksEvo997 wrote:Correct me if I'm wrong, but, Rabbit Hill.
Prada wrote:I spent 5 minutes plunging my toilet today.
Phathry25 wrote:Don't try to apply logic to anything MiNi says.
Oh xD Never thought of that, but when you mentioned it, it was little similarEvo997 wrote:No I meant the layout of this one