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Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby 270 » Fri Jun 05, 2015 8:23 am

Twenty Acre Creek MX Park
The sun is setting after another dry, hot day in the Australian outback, so its time to throw on your helmet for one last session before the days end! The track is rough and rutted and will put your suspension and bike setup to the test!
This has been my first track i've created for this game, and i've had great fun doing it! I couldn't have done any of this without all the great tutorials on this forum so a big thank you to everyone who has spent the time and effort writing them.
Please feel free to use any of the decals, statues or anything in anyway you please!
Enjoy!
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Tomsiiix » Fri Jun 05, 2015 12:11 pm

Nice track man :D
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Kembo693 » Fri Jun 05, 2015 2:42 pm

Are the shadows ment to be BLACK, or is there something wrong? I mean on the other end of the track, I cannot see anything in the shaded spots.

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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby 270 » Fri Jun 05, 2015 3:32 pm

Any chance you could post a screenshot? The shadows were meant to be dark, however not so dark that you can see anything on the track..
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby 270 » Fri Jun 05, 2015 4:06 pm

Updating the track link now, Link in the first post will work...must have accidentally saved the wrong shadingx2 file when i was playing around with it! :oops: The shadows seem to only show up like that on low graphic settings however, which is why i missed it before i uploaded. Let me know if it works now!
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Taxxman » Sat Jun 06, 2015 3:16 am

Hey mate. You've done a great job for your first track, It really has an Australian outback feel, you have nailed that perfectly!
Now this is just my opinion, but the track feels fairly harsh, and the edges around the track feel fairly sharp if you know what I mean.
A little smoothing of all the edges would, I think, make the overall feel of the track a little better. Though as I said, great job!

Look forward to seeing what you have in store for the future,
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby JohnDagan629 » Sat Jun 06, 2015 3:29 am

WHAT KAWI ARE YOU RIDING IN THAT SCREENSHOT??? Link to download please? I need it badly!

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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Wahlamt » Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:55 am

Insanely goos job for being your first track! There's just a few things I noticed. At 1 or 2 doubles, the landing is reaally steep, or the whole landing ia more like a take off. I doubt it's that steep "up to the landing part" in real life. I'd suggest to make it a little smoother. The ruts is pretty good, but in one way they're edgy. Try work on getting them a little smoother. With that said, still a good track! :)

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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Tomsiiix » Sat Jun 06, 2015 2:59 pm

Thanks for correcting the problem man :p nice track I love it
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby pulse » Sat Jun 06, 2015 5:50 pm

this by far one of my favs. very realistic scaling, great new texure that I havent seen any one use. great realistic ruts, awesome detail in the track. heck this is a 9/10 out of my book.

one this i do have to say is the triple step up's landing is a little harsh on transition but all n all, I love it.
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby pulse » Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:43 pm

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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby 270 » Mon Jun 08, 2015 3:33 am

Thanks for all the great feedback everyone :D I'll keep in mind those few suggestions for my next track i make!
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby CrossFlow Racing#16 » Mon Jun 08, 2015 9:39 am

Sick job on the track man! Wondering if you are gonna be making anymore aussie tracks?
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby 270 » Mon Jun 08, 2015 10:17 am

Yeah i reckon i might have a go at some replicas! I have a few favourites in Vic that i want to try making at some stage
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Re: Twenty Acre Creek MX

Postby Mikey » Mon Jun 08, 2015 11:24 am

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