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Kilien Cadeau
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ACF ISLAND SX

Postby Kilien Cadeau » Thu Jul 04, 2019 4:25 pm

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Hello everyone.

I present you today my first track of sx.

Thank you for being indulgent and giving constructive criticism.

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sethypeety
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby sethypeety » Fri Jul 05, 2019 4:09 am

First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby Kilien Cadeau » Fri Jul 05, 2019 9:56 am

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this is pictures of track

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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby Kilien Cadeau » Fri Jul 05, 2019 4:05 pm

sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!



I read your response very encouraging, I remember everything and thank you

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lorismodard36
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby lorismodard36 » Tue Jul 16, 2019 8:44 pm

Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby lorismodard36 » Tue Jul 16, 2019 8:49 pm

sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!

Ducoup ce serai bien sympa de remettre l bonne version pas tout en blanc, j'ai mal au yeux
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby callmepapi » Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:16 am

lorismodard36 wrote:Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:

yibtu vsv rdght setgoi rdh no one likes your language

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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby sethypeety » Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:45 am

lorismodard36 wrote:
sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!

Ducoup ce serai bien sympa de remettre l bonne version pas tout en blanc, j'ai mal au yeux


La capture d'écran qu'il a postée avait l'air bien, je voudrais aussi qu'il poste un lien fixe. Ou au moins, postez un lien vers le fichier ouvert afin que nous puissions voir ce qu’il a mal fait.
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Postby lorismodard36 » Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:13 pm

callmepapi wrote:
lorismodard36 wrote:Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:

yibtu vsv rdght setgoi rdh no one likes your language

?? don't understand boii
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Re: ACF ISLAND SX

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