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ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Thu Jul 04, 2019 4:25 pm
by Kilien Cadeau
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https://www.mediafire.com/folder/90isj4c2xbnwn/

Hello everyone.

I present you today my first track of sx.

Thank you for being indulgent and giving constructive criticism.

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Fri Jul 05, 2019 4:09 am
by sethypeety
First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Fri Jul 05, 2019 9:56 am
by Kilien Cadeau
Image

this is pictures of track

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Fri Jul 05, 2019 4:05 pm
by Kilien Cadeau
sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!

I read your response very encouraging, I remember everything and thank you

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2019 8:44 pm
by lorismodard36
Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Tue Jul 16, 2019 8:49 pm
by lorismodard36
sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!
Ducoup ce serai bien sympa de remettre l bonne version pas tout en blanc, j'ai mal au yeux

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:16 am
by callmepapi
lorismodard36 wrote:Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:
yibtu vsv rdght setgoi rdh no one likes your language

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:45 am
by sethypeety
lorismodard36 wrote:
sethypeety wrote:First of all, I can't see the image so I don't know what the track is supposed to look like... The whole track is white, no decals, no objects, nothing. Because I can ride the track, what I can tell you is that this track is solid for your first track. Since I couldn't see anything it was kinda hard to understand where to go at first but I figured it out I think. The two rhythm sections after the start I think are built good but the second one doesn't flow very good, jumping out of the pit into the short rhythm section was just kinda weird. All of your berms are built kinda oddly too, next time set your focus to 0 when you are building them. The only other advise I could give is to fix the track so I can see the objects, or link the necessary tracks needed to see objects and decals. Really great job though, keep up the good work!
Ducoup ce serai bien sympa de remettre l bonne version pas tout en blanc, j'ai mal au yeux
La capture d'écran qu'il a postée avait l'air bien, je voudrais aussi qu'il poste un lien fixe. Ou au moins, postez un lien vers le fichier ouvert afin que nous puissions voir ce qu’il a mal fait.

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Wed Jul 17, 2019 12:13 pm
by lorismodard36
callmepapi wrote:
lorismodard36 wrote:Ce serai bien de faire une petite fun race de test avant le sx tour sur ce track :wink:
yibtu vsv rdght setgoi rdh no one likes your language
?? don't understand boii

Re: ACF ISLAND SX

Posted: Sat Jul 20, 2019 9:42 am
by Kilien Cadeau