Upcoming Models #2

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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby mx985 » Thu Aug 03, 2017 1:57 am

Quinten wrote:
mx985 wrote:
Andy_Hack wrote:Are you still changing things on the model?

Yup not even close to final.still need bakes for tons of parts,and still making parts.


Is this gonna be a free release on the forums?

Yeah.
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Quinten » Thu Aug 03, 2017 2:01 am

mx985 wrote:
Quinten wrote:
mx985 wrote:Yup not even close to final.still need bakes for tons of parts,and still making parts.


Is this gonna be a free release on the forums?

Yeah.

you dah man :D
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Kenny154 » Thu Aug 03, 2017 6:55 am

So i decided to model a 2016 Rmz Stadium plate and some Spp hand gaurds(i couldnt find their proper logo)
so this is what i got helpful tips would be awesome!!!! :D :D
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Brad smith17 » Tue Aug 08, 2017 3:31 am

Kenny154 wrote:So i decided to model a 2016 Rmz Stadium plate and some Spp hand gaurds(i couldnt find their proper logo)
so this is what i got helpful tips would be awesome!!!! :D :D
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Andy_Hack » Tue Aug 08, 2017 3:50 pm

Brad smith17 wrote:Alt F4? <3

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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Kenny154 » Wed Aug 09, 2017 6:25 am

Brad smith17 wrote:
Kenny154 wrote:So i decided to model a 2016 Rmz Stadium plate and some Spp hand gaurds(i couldnt find their proper logo)
so this is what i got helpful tips would be awesome!!!! :D :D
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Alt F4? <3


Youre just mad i can make something :wink: :lol:
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby DeenenMX » Wed Aug 09, 2017 3:12 pm

Quinten wrote:
mx985 wrote:
Quinten wrote:
Is this gonna be a free release on the forums?

Yeah.

you dah man :D


Do you have a time indication when it will be released? Bike looks so sick, can't wait any longer! :D
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby zebzone235 » Wed Aug 16, 2017 10:01 pm

My attempt at a 2004 kx250, thought it was about time we had a kx250 ingame

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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Kenny154 » Thu Aug 17, 2017 10:24 am

[quote="zebzone235"]My attempt at a 2004 kx250, thought it was about time we had a kx250 ingame
Why doesnt te very bottom of the crame connect to the other piece where the footpegs mount?
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby zebzone235 » Thu Aug 17, 2017 7:11 pm

Kenny154 wrote:Why doesnt te very bottom of the crame connect to the other piece where the footpegs mount?

I just haven't added that yet, everything on that picture i made yesterday just to have something as a base, today i'll continue mocking up the frame and start on the engine

This is how it's supposed to be
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Kenny154 » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:42 am

I just haven't added that yet, everything on that picture i made yesterday just to have something as a base, today i'll continue mocking up the frame and start on the engine
Alright Good luck with it will be good to see it finished
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Andy_Hack » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:04 pm

zebzone235 wrote:...

Your frame looks skinnier than Nicole Richie after a diet. These bottom tubes are actually round instead of 4-sided.
That shock reservoir more like a pen to me than a reservoir.
Forks are completely wrong aswell, those outer tubes are way too long, the upper triple clamp looks like it's part of the fork tubes?
A wireframe would also help big time to spot some flaws, also the fork lugs don't need a hole in them.
The swingarms are way too straight, they look like they're off a china bike.
Your whole model is already a mess, it starts with that horrible picture you used in the background and ends with already making high polys for your parts. I'm really asking myself if you even looked at the bike or not?

Anyways, this might sound harsh but I don't think these pictures might change anything, however here are some pictures:

Bike:
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Shock:
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Forks:
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Swingarms:
http://www.ebay.ie/itm/KX250-250F-KX-06-07-08-swingarm-and-both-linkage-pieces-with-bushings-bolts-/252726096759?hash=item3ad7a63377:g:sSoAAOSwNnRYe9zo

It takes a few minutes to find all the pictures you need, I don't get why you guys don't do that?
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby broland278 » Fri Aug 18, 2017 2:42 pm

Andy_Hack wrote:
zebzone235 wrote:...

blah blah blah andy has tumor


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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby zebzone235 » Fri Aug 18, 2017 6:41 pm

broland278 wrote:
Andy_Hack wrote:
zebzone235 wrote:...

blah blah blah andy has tumor


GG


Sounds about right, first of all there is no triple clamp on the forks, why can't people just be happy that someone for once makes something? i'm not a professional and i never claimed to be. I'm not gonna charge money for the models like some other people do, i wanted to make a kx250 so i'm trying it out, if people want to use it or not that's their problem not mine. Also last time i got shit on by Andy i had just started out and he said my frame looked like a wheelbarrow, that was pretty accurate tho
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Re: Upcoming Models #2

Postby Aaron Hall » Fri Aug 18, 2017 7:53 pm

zebzone235 wrote:first of all there is no triple clamp on the forks

Looks like there is because of how big an increase there is in the forks width

Andy_Hack wrote:Your frame looks skinnier than Nicole Richie after a diet. These bottom tubes are actually round instead of 4-sided.
That shock reservoir more like a pen to me than a reservoir.
Forks are completely wrong aswell, those outer tubes are way too long, the upper triple clamp looks like it's part of the fork tubes?
A wireframe would also help big time to spot some flaws, also the fork lugs don't need a hole in them.
The swingarms are way too straight, they look like they're off a china bike.
Your whole model is already a mess, it starts with that horrible picture you used in the background and ends with already making high polys for your parts. I'm really asking myself if you even looked at the bike or not?

Anyways, this might sound harsh but I don't think these pictures might change anything, however here are some pictures:


If you look past the 'harsh' comments from andy he is actually trying to help. Not really that hard to understand what he means
1. He is saying the frame is too thin you either want to remodel it or make it fatter
2.Shock reservoir is way off in size
3.save polys, add them somewhere else where the detail is needed
4.make the swingarm curve more as it isnt just a straight rod
5.use better preview pics, maybe ones which he has provided
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