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Suzuki Attempt

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I made a suzuki of some sort. I just want some feedback on what i need to do to it
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bad screenshot but i should have more soon
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savage_ryan4 wrote:I made a suzuki of some sort. I just want some feedback on what i need to do to it
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bad screenshot but i should have more soon
IMO you should use less logos, smaller logos, more shapes. Not a bad start tho
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808 wrote: IMO you should use less logos, smaller logos, more shapes. Not a bad start tho
possibly remove the gaerne and make the r365 and excel smaller?
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Re: Suzuki Attempt

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savage_ryan4 wrote:
808 wrote: IMO you should use less logos, smaller logos, more shapes. Not a bad start tho
possibly remove the gaerne and make the r365 and excel smaller?
It's all up to you. Just make it how you think looks good
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808 wrote: It's all up to you. Just make it how you think looks good
thanks man, i'll do that
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This actually doesn't look too bad, I dig the fairings. I would work on the numberplates and rear fender more, I find the number plates to be most difficult :(, but it all comes with practice. Very good start, I actually like the logo positioning of the fairings how they are, but they could use an accent color.
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made changes to the plate and the shroud, i wanted to do that little offset line under the excel, didn't come out how it looked in ps. also realized how the rear fender logos are too big, i changed that after these were taken
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now focused on the shroud more than anything.
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savage_ryan4 wrote:made changes to the plate and the shroud, i wanted to do that little offset line under the excel, didn't come out how it looked in ps. also realized how the rear fender logos are too big, i changed that after these were taken
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now focused on the shroud more than anything.
Better for sure, and it'll get better with time. I learn the most from messing shit up and trying to fix it. Keep it up
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