Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
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Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
Sup guys here you go with my first track for MXSIMULATOR then try go easy on my ha ha , I would can't forget to say thanks for some guys
Wake , DDMX , Wilson , Showtime , DJ , Bas and JPRLisbon they helped me teaching , motivatin and testint my track. Thanks guys you rock
I hope you like this track , k i know the track isnot perfect but is pretty fun , enjoy
and i'm sure i'll still making more tracks cuz i love this game , i love this community.
Leave a descent comment about my track
Download Track
http://www.mediafire.com/file/nay5tzdzjbw/PineCreek.rar
Download Track for slow computers( Without shadows file)
http://www.mediafire.com/file/hm25xzktuwo/PineCreek.rar
Thanks guys , you're amazing like this community
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Last edited by FactoryBR21 on Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:57 am, edited 1 time in total.
Mbutler183 wrote:I remember when we had to play mva instead of mxs, what a load of shit that was.
Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
Looks sick bruzzz D/L'ing now!
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
its about freaking time...
ill edit with a review
ok after awhile of thinking and getting some screens here it is
i agree with gordy i couldnt see some of the ruts or bumps in the track and that got a lil annoying not enough to make me not want to play it but its still a negative factor. i can tell some effort went into the objects and decals the layout was kinda fun besides all the jumps that were in a 90 degree turn (not that there a bad thing its different but i just dont like em...)
overall some minor things brought it down from a 5 so id say a 4.6
ill edit with a review
ok after awhile of thinking and getting some screens here it is
i agree with gordy i couldnt see some of the ruts or bumps in the track and that got a lil annoying not enough to make me not want to play it but its still a negative factor. i can tell some effort went into the objects and decals the layout was kinda fun besides all the jumps that were in a 90 degree turn (not that there a bad thing its different but i just dont like em...)
overall some minor things brought it down from a 5 so id say a 4.6
Last edited by Pumaxcs on Tue Dec 09, 2008 4:48 am, edited 1 time in total.
Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
an interesting first go at an mxs track.
first of all, i really think the track would have benefited from either more clearly highlighted ruts/jumps via decals, or with the repositioning of the light source to a lower spot to illuminate them better.
In its current state, i often felt like i was "flying blind" unable to clearly make out the rhythm section ahead of me.
the disp itself was fun and interesting, you made use of the large rolling whoops well, however, i feel that the track could have benefited from a few more complex rhythm sections. The corners were pretty straight forward and perhaps could have benefited from some variation in the camber.
the decals looked good for the most part, however, there was areas where the decals had a clear sharp edge where one ended and one begun, and that always wrecks the look of decals for me.
the excavator looked really cool, and i hope to see some similar models from you in the future
first of all, i really think the track would have benefited from either more clearly highlighted ruts/jumps via decals, or with the repositioning of the light source to a lower spot to illuminate them better.
In its current state, i often felt like i was "flying blind" unable to clearly make out the rhythm section ahead of me.
the disp itself was fun and interesting, you made use of the large rolling whoops well, however, i feel that the track could have benefited from a few more complex rhythm sections. The corners were pretty straight forward and perhaps could have benefited from some variation in the camber.
the decals looked good for the most part, however, there was areas where the decals had a clear sharp edge where one ended and one begun, and that always wrecks the look of decals for me.
the excavator looked really cool, and i hope to see some similar models from you in the future
instupitious.
Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
wow that track looks sexy
Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
I thought the track was fun but one major problem I have is that the jumps are to small for the track, its a fast track and im way over jumping every jump.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
You gotta slow down mittocs, thats all. Br, this track is great, I really like it.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
I thought they were real and good size.... sorry if is it bad 2 you
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
I like this track FactoryBR21 great job, thx
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
i wish i could ride this track but because my pc is so shit i can't couldn't you have made it something other the a .saf so i could remove the objects so you could at least ride it ahaha. It looks so good
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
it laggs a bit for me. And yeah it shouldent be safed so we could delite statues.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
There should be a PineCreek folder created somewhere. Just chuck a statues file from a blank track into that. It will be hard to see where the track goes though
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
you mean blank not black? Well i got it to work, but not with the "Black track" I just turned down my graphics a bit. thanks enyways.
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Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
WOW this track is sick, i love the roughness of the track.
It feels like a GP track. Great work, i wanna see more rough/sand tracks from you!
It feels like a GP track. Great work, i wanna see more rough/sand tracks from you!
Re: Pine Creek - By FactoryBR21
Yeah its really rough but still smooth in some way..Really great track!