Discordramonzera#4717
Bike is on the 450 SXF
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Just a "few" Critiques as to why you should not sell this, and to inform the buyers of what they're getting.
1) you norms are absolutely terrible or either must not be applied, or not triangulated
2)your front forks aren't color mapped and are not 1 piece. also your axle bolt doesn't even line up with whatever black dot that is on the color map.
3)Bike Model does not match with the rider model nor the Pivot Points
4)I have absolutely no words...
5)again forks do not line up, your fender is going through your radiator, and the motor isn't even one piece.
6)your subframe is sticking through the plastics and your airbox is dramatically incorrect.
7) your bolts consist of 4 edges, and your shock is not where near correct, your motor again is not 1 piece nor does it have shading, and your clutch cover shows no depth dude to shading and norms
9)again, models don't line up, and the front controls aren't even colored correctly
10) lack of detail, your front forks should look like this:
Not this:
11) your upper and lower forks don't even line up properly
because you seem to love to call people's work complete crap, yea this model isn't the greatest but still..you can give him, the advice w/out making him wanna stop making content
this model would also look about 10x better if this was completed:
1) Complete Color map makeover
2) Complete Spec Map makeover
3) Better Materials on the blender model,
3) Proper Bolts made for the Bike.
4) Fixed front forks
5) Fixed pivot points
4) invert the normal map and triangulate the model.
after these are fixed i do believe that the bike would look much better.
there you go colt, there is your constructive criticism, now take your tampon pack elsewhere.
we got a sherlock holmes ooh man. I'm doing my best on the model. I have been rendering for over 3 years, but I started modeling a short time ago, I don't know all the texture, techniques or anything, either, but all I know, I am using in this model. If you were as good at making models as criticize for mistakes, you would be a good modeled
Fullwood wrote:this model would also look about 10x better if this was completed:
1) Complete Color map makeover
2) Complete Spec Map makeover
3) Better Materials on the blender model,
3) Proper Bolts made for the Bike.
4) Fixed front forks
5) Fixed pivot points
4) invert the normal map and triangulate the model.
after these are fixed i do believe that the bike would look much better.
there you go colt, there is your constructive criticism, now take your tampon pack elsewhere.
you act like giving constructive criticism is a bad thing, and sh*tting on there work is more helpful
Fullwood wrote:this model would also look about 10x better if this was completed:
1) Complete Color map makeover
2) Complete Spec Map makeover
3) Better Materials on the blender model,
3) Proper Bolts made for the Bike.
4) Fixed front forks
5) Fixed pivot points
4) invert the normal map and triangulate the model.
after these are fixed i do believe that the bike would look much better.
there you go colt, there is your constructive criticism, now take your tampon pack elsewhere.
you act like giving constructive criticism is a bad thing, and sh*tting on there work is more helpful
Discord ramonzera#4717
