Boss 2 ft.Crossman/Phathry/Jeremy

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supercross711
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Boss 2 ft.Crossman/Phathry/Jeremy

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Plus p2sta, Evans, and Hollin.
Boss 2


link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VYbj2j5L ... e=youtu.be

hope you guys like it :)
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Re: Boss 2 ft.Crossman/Phathry/Jeremy

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ummm, I guess there is no right way for me to say this, but I was not a big fan of it all. Sooooo awkward between each rider switching songs, clipping the songs and mixing parts of em together seems real off. Also I feel there was too much of the same effect, and it was not balanced at all.

For me Evans, it is not that your videos are bad, because they are far from bad, but far from what they could be. Things I notice with your videos, is you use too much of the same clips over and over. Your videos for me personally lack flow. They seem all over the place, and does not tell a story or what the purpose is.

Not saying these things, because you need to change your style, but simply to point out what lacks in your videos with my eyes. No hard feelings, just a honest opinion.
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Re: Boss 2 ft.Crossman/Phathry/Jeremy

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MXJProductions wrote:ummm, I guess there is no right way for me to say this, but I was not a big fan of it all. Sooooo awkward between each rider switching songs, clipping the songs and mixing parts of em together seems real off. Also I feel there was too much of the same effect, and it was not balanced at all.

For me Evans, it is not that your videos are bad, because they are far from bad, but far from what they could be. Things I notice with your videos, is you use too much of the same clips over and over. Your videos for me personally lack flow. They seem all over the place, and does not tell a story or what the purpose is.

Not saying these things, because you need to change your style, but simply to point out what lacks in your videos with my eyes. No hard feelings, just a honest opinion.
ya its chill, MX Sim vids for me arejust fun little projects to do when im bored. I agree i diddnt like the flow either but eh whatever. theres always more videos to come and i can work on it. thanks for your opinions though.
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Re: Boss 2 ft.Crossman/Phathry/Jeremy

Post by Fransoo773 »

I didn't find the transitions that bad, think they worked fine. You definitely do need some colour correction though, the naked game colours are unbalanced and look nooby. Honestly I'm a little disappointed, you can do much better.
Ben Fransoo, OG.
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