SX Practice Track by Ohagan75

Ohagan75 · Post by **Ohagan75** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 1:20 am

Hey guys this is my first track for Mx Sim and i have it at a stage where i think it is ready for a public release.
I would like to thank:
Motoboss for use of his objects from the Stewart Compound,
Checkerz for giving me tutorials over Teamspeak last night and his finish banner from winter indoors,
yFmx for his shed from Redwood private track,
JLV for the blank track and game,
Craig for help with the bridge and anyone else i forgot.

Name in game is SX Practice Track.

LINK: http://www.mediafire.com/?226ibfb9qf9hct8

norcal187 · Post by **norcal187** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 1:33 am

link?

Boblob801 · Post by **Boblob801** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 1:52 am

norcal187 wrote:link?

lololololol

norcal187 · Post by **norcal187** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 1:53 am

whats so dam funny? haha

Post by **jlv** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 2:06 am

I'd make fun of him but I've done the same thing...

J.Armstrong · Post by **J.Armstrong** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 2:08 am

lol im stumped. i clicked the pic and the image just pops up so how the heck do i download this track?

137 · Post by **137** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 2:52 am

Track looks sick.

But one thing that makes me wonder is how do you forget a link?

Ohagan75 · Post by **Ohagan75** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 3:51 am

wow thats awkward. i had the mediafire link copied and pasted in but i obviously put the image code in twice

sorry about that

JT43 · Post by **JT43** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 4:22 pm

the track flows great, and i dont want to seem picky but the track map is a bit messy

mxsisboss · Post by **mxsisboss** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 4:29 pm

Downloading now looks good.

checkerz · Post by **checkerz** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 5:38 pm

Track isn't bad, and isn't great. Here are some things I recommend tweaking for next time...

2 whoops sections, 2 triples, 2 "finish style" jumps, 1 short rhythm section... Less of the blah stuff and more sections that allow you to do different things and really separate yourself.

The whoops are hard and fun. (insert mom joke)

The rhythm is extremely easy to jump 4 into on a 250f without trying. That's not realistic. I think it's from a lack of resistance in the traction.

The face on the over under jump has a sharp edge on it and no transition. Smooth this out.

The area where you flattened the double and before the wall is messy, perception is key and that looks messy.

Other than that, it's a good start. I think the corners were a bit wide while the straights were a nice narrower width. I'd tighten the turns back up.

Ohagan75 · Post by **Ohagan75** » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:41 pm

Thanks everyone. I will try and do a better job next time

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