Public Edit Ep.2 - Feedback & Advice

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This is just to get advice and feedback not to receive complete negativity. Don't just bite my neck off for no reason.
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updated link sorry guys
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sorry updated link
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The camera placement and renders are good, too much of the shake/zoom effect, kinda nauseating. I bet you'll get a lot of crap for that music choice, too loud and only a few will like the genre. Some of the riding looked kinda goony also, but I'm trying to be objective and not too harsh in criticism. I didn't see episode 1, but maybe in episode 3 you'll try to find some music that appeals to more people and reduce the crazy thump/zoom thing. That's the best I can do for a critique. Keep digging!
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awsome ! thanks for the feedback man !
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TeamHavocRacing wrote: I didn't see episode 1

hahahaa you didnt want to it was terrible
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My best effort was kind of a test vid that I never followed up on lol, so you're already doing better than I am! I just used Windows Movie Maker. Static cameras and basic cuts..hehe. Go man go! Show me how it's done!
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you need to get sony vegas !! but cool beat and stuff and color correction is a big thing
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I just looked again at your vid and I think all you need is to try to exclude crashes unless you intend to show a comeback or something. The bump thing is actually cool if kept to 1 segment or so. I also think the music should be based on who you want to impress. It's hard to be truly neutral when judging, lol. I'm not really qualified to judge MXS vids, per se. Our best videographer MXJeff is on to greener pastures these days.
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