Upcoming Models #2

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Re: Upcoming Models #2

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Well I guess I'll be the one to criticize and not just say "its amazing!!! RELEASE PLEASE!!!". Don't take this criticism personal or anything just trying to help you out.

1. I have no idea what is going on in the corner here, its not close to the real thing and it looks pretty weird. Could be due to vertices not connecting or something weird goin on with the low poly? Would be easier to tell you how to fix it if you showed the lowpoly wireframe.

2. The lines here I'm guessing are from lines being to close together. It should be a nice smooth curve like the real thing. What happens when you turbosmooth is that the mesh divides in the middle of the plane, closer you have two edges the sharper the edge you are going to get on the high poly.

3. These lines should be straight and not wavy. Not sure why they are like that, only thing I can think off is its a low poly issue. Try to really pay attention to lines and curves on the model, they need to flow. Working from a really low poly and adding detail in later really helps.

4. Where the fender meets the front plate should be curved, yours is straight.

And you know about the rear fender obviously.

Hopefully I didn't come off to harsh, but work on those things, even if it takes 5 try's at the same fender you will get better and better each time!
Thanks for the info, really helps with criticism like this to get it done.. trust me ill remake them each time until there perfect.
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^fix it and then release it please!!! :D :lol: :lol:
Haha I am just kidding, take your time, you can be glad that you got some help by m121c, he knows what hes talking about ;) *apple polisher mode off* :lol:
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Andy_Hack wrote:^fix it and then release it please!!! :D :lol: :lol:
Haha I am just kidding, take your time, you can be glad that you got some help by m121c, he knows what hes talking about ;) *apple polisher mode off* :lol:
Andy, you'll release your kxf template ?
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Yes, i heard he will tomorrow, but you will be able to download it just from 2pm to 2.20pm, later he will release the link so goons don't have it.
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Guesser#11 wrote:
Andy, you'll release your kxf template ?
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yamaha#521 wrote:
Guesser#11 wrote:
Andy, you'll release your kxf template ?
*slap* *slap* * slap* *slap* *slap* *slap* *slap*
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So i remembered I just so happened to have a brand new un-opened yz125/250 (guess its open now :lol: ) front fender laying around so i decided to take a few reference pics for ya. #pagerape

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That's the older one.
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Its from an 05 yz125, even though it is different, its still close. the front of it is the only different part to my knowledge.
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Heres the newer one, its still the same general shape wise, but the older one has the line things coming together. On the newer one they go straight and the tip has a more arrow-like shape.

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Thanks Guys, i have 2 2013's so i got the images down for that.. i just have to go retake them.. my phone fucked up so i lost everything on it -_-.. But its still good to have you guys send me all the reference images
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fixed the wireframe and texture issues for my 125 hybrid, just need to export the new frame. If anyone could give me a hand with exporting then I would really appreciate it
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That's a 250 pipe....
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tbh i cant tell the differnce, was gonna set it as a 250 and a 125
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There's a big difference, the 250 one goes one way and then back on its self an te 125 goes straight out one way.
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