Upcoming Models #2

[Jonathan]

I promise ill post some renders when i have the visor done.

[Duckstream]

Got bit boored/inspired to do models again....

some off you migth know this

i cant render i know...



ps. Dont worry crf is on ferrys hands now compleatly so i wont forget to finish it, also my skins are making progress, this model is just something that pops out ones in a while in my head ...

[jesplind]

TM?

[Duckstream]

Still shitty renders.

[Mona]

The Crf is coming along good. Still a lot of small things to do. And a lot of small things that aren't perfect in this picture, they will probably be the last things i do on the model, since i need to get a couple big things done before them (carb/efi, small engine hoses, finish linkage). The colors were done in wings, they aren't that great, i know haha. Thanks Ducky for a few parts, and Eskwaad for the front end.

What do you guys think so far? Anything big that you see wrong?

I hope that i can get the model finished soon so i can get everything unwrapped, and get the wireframe done.

[Wilson]

Curve in the rear number plate needs work. Also needs more polys where theres a sharp curve.

[Mona]

Yeah, i've remade that numberplate 2 times now, and i haven't been able to find one that i like. Maybe i can bevel that crease, and make it smoother? The weird looking light on the rest of it is just from how it was triangulated. I'll work on making the polys flow better.

[toonys66]

wowowow, seriously it looks so nice!!!!!! just on the rear number plate there are some little hole at the bottom on the plastic piece that go down, but otherwise it looks awesome!!!!

[Mona]

Curve in the rear number plate needs work. Also needs more polys where theres a sharp curve.

How's it looking now? I think it looks a lot better.

[tyskorn]

I think so too.It looks way better than before.Can't wait for that model!

[eSAyeM]

make sure you base that motor off of pictures, I hate skinning motors because I always have to fudge things because the model isn't right.

[Wilson]

Post a wireframe render up.

[ShowtimeMx]

Curve in the rear number plate needs work. Also needs more polys where theres a sharp curve.

http://i495.photobucket.com/albums/rr31 ... rf-new.png
How's it looking now? I think it looks a lot better.

The bike is looking pretty good, but wilson is spot on the rear part where the fender and side plate meet it needs work the curve is off. if you need help i still have two different crf back ends that i have sitting on my hard drive and im sure wilson could help since his crf model looks great and if you could get messiah to help or respond his crf rear end is spot on and looks incredible.

[ShowtimeMx]

my apology for the double post but i tried finding an example but couldnt find one so i just took pics of the crf wilson sent me a long time ago:

its the curve part

[mace-x]

yup, if i dont miss now it´s finished! (the modeling part)
here´s a render done a lot better than the last ones






is something missing?
oppinions/suggestions?
constructive critiscm?
all is very appreciated, thanks guys!